30chanchal

Jinse jeene Marne ki ummeed laga Rakhi thi unse sath chhut sa gaya Hai 
          	Har bar bahut Shambhala is dil ko lagta hai ab Pura toot sa gaya Hai 
          	Rona bhi nahi aata Hai apne halat Hai yaar  lagta Hai aankho ka Dariya sukh sa gaya Hai 
          	

Shweta128

Hi,
          
          Thank you for liking and commenting on my story. I hope you are enjoying it.
          As it is my first time writing one, I am feeling a little stuck up in the story. I need your help as a reader. If you have any suggestions/ideas that I can incorporate or about any specific plot or person or relationship you would wish to read, please do leave a message. 
          Let me know about whom would you like to read and what would you like,it would be a great help.
          
          Thank you so much for showering so much love again!
          
          Shweta 

30chanchal

@Shweta128 hi 
            There is nothing to thank me about your story is really awesome that anyone will like so don't thank me bro 
            And about any suggestions I would like to see some character which oppose Raghav and say brothers to don't let Aanchal marry with Raghav 
            May be someone from Raghav's past 
            
            Thanks for considering me to share some opinion regarding your story
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Dishadoshi104

Happy dussehra chanchal to you and your family sweetie. I will pray to mother that she brings infinite love, happiness and success in life of you and your family. Wish your family on my behalf. Take care.

30chanchal

@Dishadoshi104 happy dussehra to you Hetvi 
            thanks for wishes .you are a constant supporter of my story .i wish god bring a lot of happiness in your life .thanks for your support..take care you too
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Dishadoshi104

Hello sweetie nice to meet you.

30chanchal

@Dishadoshi104 it means naughty restless
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Dishadoshi104

Nice name. Myself hetvi. What does your name mean?
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30chanchal

Jinse jeene Marne ki ummeed laga Rakhi thi unse sath chhut sa gaya Hai 
          Har bar bahut Shambhala is dil ko lagta hai ab Pura toot sa gaya Hai 
          Rona bhi nahi aata Hai apne halat Hai yaar  lagta Hai aankho ka Dariya sukh sa gaya Hai