@smoky_cloud my only feed back is, you have a very special talent....writing. you put down such detail and information. I plays in my head so fast and quickly like real life in front of me. It is all there, no questioning or trying to fill in the blanks. It's very well written. You need to keep writing and you need to know this is your calling. Somehow find away to make it your profession. We love the Killers, so it is even better to us. But this story is one you can take and have others read and it would capture their hearts and minds too. This story is big stuff.
