kanikawrites

Hey does anyone know the name of the story where Manik and Nandini gets married under certain circumstances forcefully by their family and Manik is like very possessive about her, they both along with their friends are part of some team where they dies while doing a mission. Then they are like reborn and then they both are in college where they are enemies but can’t stay away from each other and Manik is like super possessive and obsessive over her
          If you know it please share the name<3

Vartika22

https://www.wattpad.com/story/372544780?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Vartika22
          Sorry for disturbing 
          Hey can you please take out your time and check the work of this new bee 
          This is her first book and according to that its quite good
          And i guess you must be knowing how much encouragement matters to the new writers so please take your little time out and ckeck the book and must add it in your reading list 
          Good day ahead 

soan_suhu

That's such a beautiful story... The concept of love yourself is needed the most.. Most books don't show it instead sticking to the depression concept.. N Sid's character is my favourite​... Simply loved this ... All d best... N update soon dear

3amthoughts12

@soan_suhu thanks a lootttttt❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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simmi18

Hey so i read your story raabta in one go and i really  liked it.  Your writing  is good  and interesting  but i wish the story was a bit smoother  the changes seem a bit abrupt but i really  really  liked the concept  and its execution  too.  According  to me manik does  not love nandini because  true love is pure and long-lasting and if a new attractive  girl could  make manik leave  nandini that easily then  how could  he ever go through  the trials of life with Nandini in the future  . Manik is insensitive  and self centered . I would  really  like if you did not go the cliche way and make nandini a strong and self  loving   FL who doesn't  need a man to nake fer feel worthy.  I would  really  like her to give a chance  to sid and tryout a realtionship with him i think  it would be a great plot and make manik see things form her perspective  . 
          All the best

filtertazz

Please give sidni a chance 
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3amthoughts12

@simmi18 and about going back, i really havent planned anything about that part yet but i assure you this nandini would be altogether diff but the transition to the new nandini may take time;)   
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3amthoughts12

@simmi18 ohh like tat yeah even m the believer and lover of the same! 
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