“She stood a front him, eyes drooped with exhaustion but lit with hope. My brother, is all I could think. “It’s okay, Jakey! I know you don’t want to hurt your brother! Please, put the gun down, don’t harm him,” she pleads, though she messed up one tiny detail, I wasn’t going after my brother, I was going after my true love, you, I thought shakily pulling and pointing my gun at her chest. She closed her eyes into a loving smile which just broke my heart. “We both love you! Everything’ll be al-” the crack of the shot rang out as the tears began it’s streaming down my face. I-I’m sorry, Ellie, I let you down, my love... ” what do you guys think of that little morsel?