ok, I don't particularly like the way my story is going if that makes sense. I'm going to stop posting or take it down until I get in a place where I can be proud of it again. Essentially I'm just going to take a break for a while, I might start the other idea I had in mind.

Fun fact: I have rampaging ADHD and autism. I got an idea for a story and now I don't want to finish the story I'm almost done with so I can write this immediately... I have created a problem for myself.