4vanilla_cinnamon4

Thank you for 24k reads! (⁠人⁠*⁠´⁠∀⁠`⁠)⁠。⁠*゚⁠+

BetriebsUnfall_

Hi Bro (ᗒᗣᗕ)՞
          
          Your stories are AMAZING...but WHY would you stab me like this bro... 
          You hurt me bro.... (。•́︿•̀。)
          
          Anyways, have a nice day and fell hugged baby. 
          Keep up the good work!!!! I really enjoy reading your stories (≧◡≦) ♡
          
          
          

BetriebsUnfall_

BRO WHAAAAT THATS SO SWEET (;´༎ຶٹ༎ຶ`)
            
            I love you bro. Stay safe out there and i will expect the next chapter to be fluffy !!! 
            
            Xoxo♡´・ᴗ・`♡
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4vanilla_cinnamon4

@BetriebsUnfall_ OMG HI POOKIE (⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)
            yeeaahhhh I really went full out on that chapter and I think I accidentally sent all my readers into grief and deep depression (haha, get it, cuz 'love and deep-space'..?. Okay fine that wasn't funny xD)
            Don't worry, next chapter will be fluffy like a cloud ☁️
            And thank you thank you thank you for your messages, they always brighten my day <3 I named my computer after you in your honor ✊
            Stay safe out there, I'm sending hugs (⁠づ⁠。⁠◕⁠‿⁠‿⁠◕⁠。⁠)⁠づ and kisses (⁠っ⁠˘⁠з⁠(⁠˘⁠⌣⁠˘⁠ ⁠)
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sylusbae

Hiiii sorry if I may be disturbing you but I’d like for you to check out my work, if you don’t mind . I finally decided to publish it. I would like your feedback 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1505351190?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=sylusbae

sylusbae

@4vanilla_cinnamon4 yeah in general thank you so much  
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4vanilla_cinnamon4

@sylusbae Hellow! Thank you for asking me to check your story! I got so excited when I read your message, it means a lot to me that you're asking me to help you (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)
            Yes, of course I'll give you feedback, I'll be more than happy to (⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠) 
            Before I start, I wanted to ask if you'd like feedback on something specific or just on everything in general (like writing style, stylistics, storyline, structure for example).
            And how should I send you my feedback? I can comment directly in your story or we can exchange some kind of other social media so we can talk privately (or write me on Pinterest, link is right under my bio). Just let me know!
            Once again, thank you so much for asking me, it makes me very happy ⊂⁠(⁠(⁠・⁠▽⁠・⁠)⁠)⁠⊃
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