@sylusbae Hellow! Thank you for asking me to check your story! I got so excited when I read your message, it means a lot to me that you're asking me to help you ( ╹▽╹ )
Yes, of course I'll give you feedback, I'll be more than happy to (✿^‿^)
Before I start, I wanted to ask if you'd like feedback on something specific or just on everything in general (like writing style, stylistics, storyline, structure for example).
And how should I send you my feedback? I can comment directly in your story or we can exchange some kind of other social media so we can talk privately (or write me on Pinterest, link is right under my bio). Just let me know!
Once again, thank you so much for asking me, it makes me very happy ⊂((・▽・))⊃