559miacat

Thnx, the new Fei fanfic is going well too. I think I prefer his character compared to his character in Bteaking innocence.  Can’t wait to see how the book turns out and their relationship develops. I think it would be funny if Yoh has to babysit her and she finds out,  

559miacat

Your welcome, I enjoy the plots I can’t guess what happens in the  long term and how the characters interact. 
          
          I’m sure the grammar will naturally improve as you continue your writing, but it’s legible as it is, it hasn’t put me off your story so far. 
          
          Good look for the future.