laurelynnnn

thank you so much for adding ‘vamp addict’ to your reading list! it means a lot to me! hope you enjoyed reading it <3<3<3

laurelynnnn

it’s perfectly okay! thanks again for asking me all those questions, they’ll help me improve my writing for sure <3 enjoy your day/night
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564jungkookie

@victoriaaaatori 
            Ah... that makes sense.,when you put it that way. and it makes perfect sense that you didn't really think about all the extra details when you wrote, I just noticed cause I tend to overthink stories, which sometimes takes all the fun away. I'm really glad that you took my comment/advice as constructive cause I really didn't want to come off as mean.
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laurelynnnn

helloo, so, I just thought that in the society, everybody couldn’t accept the fact that vampires could be accepted, just like everyone doesn’t accept basic things like homosexuality in nowadays society for example. I didn’t explain why they had this opinion though because I didn’t think it would be relevant in the story and I didn’t know what could have made them hate vamps this much. then, I agree that jaemin’s character accepted very quickly his vampirism. I’m aware that it wouldn’t have happened this quick in reality, but as the story wasn’t focused on him, I couldn’t have him throwing a tantrum every time someone reminded him he was a vampire. and I’ll say hyuck was questioning about the fact he was falling for a vampire, so he didn’t mind much about having a vampire best friend I guess. Anyway, let me be honest, I didn’t really think about those things while writing so, having you pointing them out helps me improve my writing! thank you so much, I’m glad you liked my work <3<3 I’ll try harder to prevent doing illogical mistakes <3
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AliceBishop999

thank you for adding my story to your reading list! hope you like it <3

564jungkookie

@AliceBishop999 your welcome!!!!!!!!!
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AliceBishop999

@564jungkookie wow thank you so much!
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564jungkookie

@AliceBishop999 
            i did, the remake of twilight was really good. i love the character development that Minho went through!!
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