suffla

Yo, I just saw your profile on a Naruto fanfic, and it caught my eye because I remembered that I am also writing a Naruto fanfic myself and it's also my first one so if you have time and feel like reading something I would appreciate if you checked that out.

suffla

Thank you so much I will definitely keep that in thought. I appreciate the honest feedback and I hope that you have a good day
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6pathsage

@suffla I just read it it has a lot of potential making a new character that isn't from the show and u are therefore able to make his conflict new and fresh though I think u should change the format of writing a bit and it would help that u try to decrease the word count as the format does not complement the high word count of even 1 chapter. I also think that u can make interesting interactions with the oc and Sasuke since both are uchiha and with the ocs interaction with Sasuke aside from that it is a story with tons of potential
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