Hello there
Thanks a lot for asking me
But I’m not a good reviewer for english stories because my mother language is not English and that’s making my review so weak , I can’t give you a trustable points . You need someone who can assessment your driving skills , story line , and all the other things in your work without trying to translate your story because translation always makes the writing skills points change and that’s why I can’t be a good choice for you . I think it’s better for both of you to ask from native readers sweetie .
Thanks again and wish all the best for you and your friend
sorry for answering your message here , my dm has problems with replies ♀️