79bypg

Happy New Years Everyone! Hope you have A Great One! 

raisxn_detre

I know that you feel this need to make chapters long, but there's really no need. When i read, i get lost, i get totally immersed in the story. The only time i notice the length of the chapter is when it's over. I don't think i can wait too much longer for the next update, so many twists and turns! By no means am i pressuring you, just a devoted reader here.  

raisxn_detre

I am a tiney bit confused on the last chapter, but that could be just me. And yes, i'm reading! Also, you shouldn't end every update with a cliffhanger (not saying you are) after a while, the cliffhanger will lose it's effect. But with that being said, cliffhangers make your story suspenseful. You're doing a great job, keep it up!