hi  !  pretty  new  to  writing  ,  especially  longer  stories  but  i'm  trying  my  best  and  really  appreciate  feedback  .  please  share  any  constructive  criticism  so  i  can  make  my  novels  better  !


there  is  no  specific  schedule  for  my  works  but  i  am  hoping  for  at  least  1  chapter  every  week  ,  i  don't  wanna  rush  anything  and  will  go  back  to  make  small  changes  and  improvements  as  often  as  i  can  .