8FallingStars8

UNCLE WILL GET OFF

8FallingStars8

aunt lydia wouldn't approve of your lies
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AlphaTurtle

your fans don't know that i wrote all your stories for you
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AlphaTurtle

i wil destroy you
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8FallingStars8

UNCLE WILL GET OFF

8FallingStars8

aunt lydia wouldn't approve of your lies
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AlphaTurtle

your fans don't know that i wrote all your stories for you
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AlphaTurtle

i wil destroy you
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8FallingStars8

massively sorry i haven't been on much at all, but i reeeaally need your help. as of monday, two of my short stories will be judged in a region-wide competition, and, knowing me for the procrastinator i am, i haven't really had too many second opinions on my pieces. i'm an idiot. the entries are to be sent in monday, and i would be forever grateful for any feedback on either Hollow (fantasy ish) or Picture Perfect (a horror vibe?). 
          they're both three pages each which should take, like, five minutes to read. 
          
          if you do, i'll read and comment on anything of yours or do nearly anything, i just reeeaally want feedback. thanks sososo much∞

AlphaTurtle

Francisco the frog lay by the still creek bed, on his favorite rock, and watched the fishes swim back and forth, back and forth. He was the protector of the pond, and the fish were his children. He basked in the ambiance of the serenity that was the water. Being on that rock, the frog finally understood what it meant to be truly at peace. BUT THAN ONE DAY A MOTHERFUCKING TURTLE CAME AND KNOCKED THAT SMUG ASS FROG OFF HIS GODDAMN ROCK. CUZ NO ONE SHOULD BE THAT HAPPY. THAT TURTLE NEEDED TO TEACH THAT PIECE OF SHIT FROG THAT LIFE IS CRUEL AND UNFORGIVING.