Hi,I was wondering if you would be willing to read what I have thus far on the story I am working on. I would like to get some criticism and thoughts to think about as I finish the first draft.
I like your pokemon story though for the title just fix it by putting a space between Odyssey and A, so it's like this:
Endless Odyssey A Pokémon Story, or you can do this
Endless Odyssey: A Pokémon Story