97Potterhead79

@Monrosey No, thank you for writing such an awesome book. Sooo good  .  I really enjoyed it.  

@97Potterhead79 I'm glad you're enjoying it :) If you're interested in reading book 2, may I suggest reading it on Inkitt? It's slightly more edited along with brand new scenes over on Inkitt but it is incomplete, unfortunately lol XD

@CaY--cAy it's a pleasure but I found your story on Inkitt so I moved over, prefer reading on there. 
            But I am enjoying the story soooo much. 

@97Potterhead79 thanks for your comments. I know I did rush Summer and Jesse’s book. Part of that was because they already knew each other from talking on the phone in college. I’ve had thoughts of writings some phone conversations in as possibly flashbacks, but I’m not sure yet. And Dana and Colt had grown up together, so they already knew each other as well. I hope I showed how even if you “know” someone, you probably don’t really “know” them very well at all unless they open up to you and you do the same. 

@SusanKSaltos So sorry about my delayed response, had a hectic few days. The only thing that I can think of is, that the ending to both stories felt a bit rushed. The characters were well developed and gave the reader a sense of who they were and who they have become individually. Maybe if you could add a bit more regarding their relationships (Summer and Jamie) and (Dana and Colt). I am sorry i am not sure if i am getting my point across?

Aw, thank you so much! That’s so sweet of you to say!!! Both these books have done well on Wattpad, I’m thinking of selling them on Amazon. Do you have any comments on anything that annoyed you or you wished happened that didn’t?  Any suggestions for improvement at all? I’d like to ensure that the books are the best they can be before I try to sell them!

@ScarlettBlackDaisy Hi there, I absolutely loved your story, the writing was brilliant, the plot was well thought out. You should be so proud of yourself.

@B474l1un 

@ScarlettBlackDaisy I just finished Knowing Xavier. I loved it, the imperfect characters, the plot, the real life tragedies that people go through everyday. It was so well written, and a pleasure to read. You should be so proud of yourself. 

@97Potterhead79 ❤️

@relativiteaa, Its my pleasure, stay safe on your side as well.

That means so much to me, thank you again 

@gold-plated It was a pleasure, it was really a great read.