DarkWorld336

Is my story entertaining you ??..and keep giving your honest feedback bro.
          
          TQ..I will consider your opinion definately

987naturelover789

@DarkWorld336 haaa yes
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DarkWorld336

@DarkWorld336 i think u, for the first time commented..you completed whole season 1 ?
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987naturelover789

@DarkWorld336 hai i am really enjoying your story it's one of the best stories I'm reading but I don't want ved to feel guilty after learning madhu abortion and also don't make ved mother as some villain. And your story has your own uniqueness so if you want to reduce hatred between them then make it cordial not like the relationship between with others i think they deserve for making suffer ved mother. And that's my opinion so go with your own plan authorjii i will love it
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jyorytzzz

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