Demonemperordazed

What do think of the plot to the Girls und Panzer: He's trauma as he overcoming it. Das Finale 3. osa: 1 luku is good or bad.

A-Simple-M1A2

@Demonemperordazed 
            Good chapter. I do recommend using bold for timeskips and Transitioning. For instance, "3 days later" and "Later" would be marked in bold. That kinda helps the reader to understand that it's a transition from one time to the other.
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Demonemperordazed

What do think of chapter 24 of Girls und Panzer: He's trauma as he overcoming it. Do you like or not. 

A-Simple-M1A2

@Demonemperordazed 
            Very good chapter. The grammar was so much better. Whatever you're doing, it's working very well. Keep up the good work.
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