Hello! I recently noticed you posted my fanfiction up in a dreamtale and dreammare collection. I'm glad you took the time to read my newly first chapter. Did you like it? Any feedback? Constructive criticism? Anyways. I hope you have a wonderful day or night. Depending on your location!
@5thFanfictionWriter
It's an interesting start, though teasingly short. I'm definitely looking forward to where you're going with it.
You're doing well on structure and spelling so far. I'm also very amused at poor Dream getting marooned by Blue.
I hope you have a good day/night too.