A10Javed

Hey everyone my new story Tinder is out now!!!

Sky_Gazer90

A10Javed

Yeah sure I will check out your book 
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MintLeafinBlackTea

Salam ukhti❤
          
          I'm just giving an honest review of your stories, I hope you don't mind ☺
          
          Pro's: there is this skill of making the readers imagine and live the story. You've got that ❤ 
          
          Con's: errors we all make and it's normal. You can edit once you complete your work.
          
          About the paragraph, I guess this long paragraph with the whole story won't attract many readers. So in Sha Allah, if you get some time try making paragraphs and making the few conversations between the characters. 
          
          As a reader, I love your work and you gotta horror genre in your cells thou ☺☺ that is a joke  by the way ☺❤☺❤☺❤
          
          Hope you have a wonderful day mate ❤☘ 
          
          Um_humairah ❤

MintLeafinBlackTea

@umm_humairah  awww I am so happy that you took it as an advise ❤❤❤ yes always ☺☺☺ in Sha Allah,  our hardworking will not go waste ❤❤
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A10Javed

@umm_humairah No I don't mind at all...... Actually you see I want attention on my stories and I work really hard on a my story... it takes me days to make one story and also weeks... but still I try my best some of them go well but some not.. Thanks for your opinion by the way... And if you do have tips... Please you can share with me... I would like to be inspire from your ideas
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