SillyLTwrites
hey there, i just shared my opinion. Your writing is good. I haven't gone through, so i have only one feedback so far - in the conversation, make it more "conversational". Other than that, I would have loved to be as skilled as you at that age. My book is Lies Out, feel free to check it out.
A1d1nZachary
@SillyLTwrites That’s really sweet of you, thank you! I’m definitely still figuring things out as I go, though — I feel like I learn something new every time I write. I really appreciate your thoughts, and I’m definitely going to check out Lies Out! I’m looking forward to reading it and seeing your story ☺️