A1d1nZachary

I’ve gone back and polished some of the earlier chapters for better continuity. If you’re rereading, you might notice a few tweaks!

A1d1nZachary

I'm truly sorry I haven't been posting lately. Things have been so hard in my life, but I promise to post the newest chapter as soon as I'm able. I really appreciate you all taking the time to read my book; it means a lot to me. In the meantime, I hope you all have a blessed day, and I'll be posting chapter 9 soon!

SillyLTwrites

hey there, i just shared my opinion. Your writing is good. I haven't gone through, so i have only one feedback so far - in the conversation, make it more "conversational". Other than that, I would have loved to be as skilled as you at that age. My book is Lies Out, feel free to check it out.

A1d1nZachary

@SillyLTwrites That’s really sweet of you, thank you! I’m definitely still figuring things out as I go, though — I feel like I learn something new every time I write. I really appreciate your thoughts, and I’m definitely going to check out Lies Out! I’m looking forward to reading it and seeing your story ☺️
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