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@quillofchaos
          	Hey please don't mind that I have mentioned about fellow writers like that. I am none here to judge anyone. As a part of this circle, I also know your fellow writers and have read them. As a writer or a reader all here have own comfort zone and boundaries while reading or writing. And I truly respect that.  Whatever I had mentioned about the opinion, its based on my personal experience of reading them. Because I have read works of those all three and yours too. So, I know the boundaries.
          	Moreover, VTFB isn't kind of person who will sit silently after court judgement as he is influential enough. So, I suggested to kill him like that...simple and immediate death after judgement, fair chance to Prarthana to kill him for snatching her real happy life, open image destruction and no legal consequences.....And as a simple and honest girl if she will feel any trauma - utna Shiv sambhal lega.

AAA_mania

@quillofchaos ohhk...let's see...I guess thats also a good way to decide
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quillofchaos

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          	  I asked jasminearun because she is reading that story so she knows better than other authors.. let it be, I am thinking of adding this question in a note in that particular chapter and what readers will say I will do accordingly...
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diksha_8111

Hey! ❤️
          
          A new chapter of His Innocent Bride is finally up! ✨
          
          Whenever you get time, please give it a read, vote if you enjoy it, and don't forget to share your thoughts in the comments. 
          
          Your comments truly make my day, and I'd love to know what you think of this update! ✨
          
          

AAA_mania

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@quillofchaos Yes there is a Prashiv FF story named "Virasat" by callmeivana...That's only Prashiv ff story not a multifandom like yours.
          You know very well that I will apparently support you decision...Don't want to kill you. Better punishment is to chase you for more and more stories. Sometimes I feel You will really kill me some day for that. ;);)

AAA_mania

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@quillofchaos
          Hey please don't mind that I have mentioned about fellow writers like that. I am none here to judge anyone. As a part of this circle, I also know your fellow writers and have read them. As a writer or a reader all here have own comfort zone and boundaries while reading or writing. And I truly respect that.  Whatever I had mentioned about the opinion, its based on my personal experience of reading them. Because I have read works of those all three and yours too. So, I know the boundaries.
          Moreover, VTFB isn't kind of person who will sit silently after court judgement as he is influential enough. So, I suggested to kill him like that...simple and immediate death after judgement, fair chance to Prarthana to kill him for snatching her real happy life, open image destruction and no legal consequences.....And as a simple and honest girl if she will feel any trauma - utna Shiv sambhal lega.

AAA_mania

@quillofchaos ohhk...let's see...I guess thats also a good way to decide
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quillofchaos

@AAA_mania 
            I asked jasminearun because she is reading that story so she knows better than other authors.. let it be, I am thinking of adding this question in a note in that particular chapter and what readers will say I will do accordingly...
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AAA_mania

@quillofchaos 
          And I tell you - those moments where audacity was too cruel for her dignity- when her saree torn by mistake while talking about his birthday and VTFB told that she was reacting like she had any dignity left- he wanted her to respond physically as his wife while forcing himself on her - when he allowed other men to molest her repeatedly like she was an owned thing - when he doubted her in context of her bond with Shiv - when he told her that she had no place to go other than him....These insults were unbearable and he has already accepted that he trapped her father in wrong accusation stratagically.
          So, she won't remorse that, actually she should dream that. Agar Shiv na hota toh VTFB ko "Ek Haseena Thi" wali strategic maut dene ka sochti mein. Ghajani also is less brutal. Uske body mein aisi kahi jagah hai sar ke siva jahaan vaar hona chahiye vaise hi weapon se but I don't know how comfortable it will be for you to write. Sorry....But that VTFB really ignites brutal violence in me. When I suggested I was keeping Shiv and other legal consequences in my mind.  But if you can make it possible than It will be soothing and satisfying as a reader and for many as a female readers - for your all readers including me.