RavenclawHermione

Hey! I came across your book and wandered if you would take a look at my Draco Malfoy fan fiction, it would mean a lot to me x

AAKWrites

Hi again! I just wanted to say that your book has a lot of potential and is an awesome read. I like Maisie and her personality overall. Also, I like how the intrigue between her and Malfoy is really building up. ;) The only thing I would change is to add some of the protagonist’s backstory with Draco. What happened during second year? Is that why Pansy is so jealous of her? I guess that the reader finds that out in future chapters. I could give you a shoutout in my next chapter of My Pride. Keep up the great work! x - Cheshire Cat
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AAKWrites

Sure, I’ll do it as soon as I have some free time. x
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