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Thanks. Totally agree. This was always meant to be a first draft to get the story down. That's the thing,I know the characters and see the setting in my head, but I need to share a bit more of that with the reader.

@pavinator A suggestion: Maybe have a little more description in each chapter because I feel like readers need to know more about the setting/mood of the story. Other than that, I love it! It really drew me in since the first chapter :))

@pavinator sure, np