moony_min
Idk when you update but I love your story! Raihan is bby boi and your writing is honestly fantastic! Tho maybe try describing Raihan with other pronouns other than he or Raihan since it gets repetitive. You could call him by his crystal blue eyes or the orange bandanna man or smth! Lolol try to diversify your pronouns but I love the story btwwww <3333333
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@moony_min Thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! It'll help a lot, so thank you for pointing that out! :D