A.C. Bennett

Hey all, I have started back on my writing. "As the Garden Dims", has been updated with a chapter 2. Please please please give me some feedback, I would truly appreciate it. 
          
          a.c.b

Hey all! I have created a story up here.  The title is "As the Garden Dims", I say this in the description but I wanted to reiterate that I created this story while doing discussion forums in my current Creative Writing course. I have never published up here so if you all are interested in the story, please give it a read. I will be updating it soon, but give me some feedback on chapter 1. 
          
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