Sliver_One
Hey there! Thanks for the follow!
litter21
Hey uh, I am the guy you made a comment on two days ago, I am not actually(fortunately) since I have essentially been blacklisted by the writer for exercising critique on his comic. This means that I can no longer make a comment nor reply to any of the comments.
litter21
Ignorance of criticism is not only one of the most basic flaws that any writer can avoid, but also one of the deadliest, since one shutting themselves away from criticism would ensure that the quality of a book or comic would remain the same or even worsen, and any unaswered plot holes would remain that: Unanswered
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ADarkSky7
@litter21 Oh I see. You're right about that, the story does need more details. I suppose GhillieCamo got tired of criticism over time and just said "Nope, *mute*"
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litter21
@ADarkSky7 Well, like I said, I exercised critique on his book and asked questions regarding plot holes in his stories. Apparently, he doesn't take criticism well in mind, which is one of the most basic flaws that any writer can avoid. My critique wasn't that harsh, but it SHOULD have been harsher. I mean, the story takes place in, what, 2070-something? And people are still using M4s, AKs, Blackhawk helicopters... Hell, Adder's weapon of choice is a Kar98K, a weapon that started manufacturing in the 1890's! To sum it up, he doesn't dive into the world's lore that he created . He doesn't explain Antrho society, FIA's and UF's structure, their equipment, why they are still such old stuff in the 2070,etc. etc. Ghillie must provide more context into these questions throughout the story. Also, in Wattpad, the "ban" is called "muting". The one muted cannot view the writer's profile nor comment on their stories.
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SomeNutJob
Welcome to Wattpad. The place where absolute nonsense happenes! :)