Alfredo

@AEOL ok thanks for listening.

@Dangerdude ok thaks for the tip i kust do it that way because the books i read have it that way but from now on i will make it that way

@AEOL13 just got the new update and read it, now, I'm not a grammer nazi, but I do have a recommendation, when people are talking you're supposed to use, ", for example, "I want an apple" Tom said, instead of, I want an apple, Tom said. I'm no teacher, it's just a recommendation. :) 

@AEOL13 k, cool.

@Dangerdude no problem thanks to you xP i will upload again today or tomorrow

Hey I just got the new update, thanks.

I like your book, and I can't wait for the update.