Absolutely loved your story. Please see message at the last chapter. Well Done on creating such an engrossing story that was also thought provoking without seeming to try to be. Some writers with try including life lessons, beliefs or messages but they tend to come across as it’s being blatantly‘pushed in your face’ - if you get my drift. You however, seem to have great talent as a writer with skill to creatively weave thought provoking ides and concepts in such a way that doesn’t feel preached, pushed or even implied on purpose at all. But rather make the reader feel like they have stumbled upon a quote that resonates or a thought path that their own mind has led them to contemplate. That is amazing balance of creative story writing with subliminal type messages that takes some serious skill! Congratulations on doing such an outstanding piece of work! Wish you had more to share with us on Wattpad!
