AGreyDawn

Hello my loves. I hope you have not forgotten me, because I have missed the hell out of you. I have a new story for you! As soon as I can get a cover figured out, I will begin posting. (And a profile refresh is also in the works, 'cause this is looking kinda dusty.) See you soon!

AGreyDawn

Hello my loves. I hope you have not forgotten me, because I have missed the hell out of you. I have a new story for you! As soon as I can get a cover figured out, I will begin posting. (And a profile refresh is also in the works, 'cause this is looking kinda dusty.) See you soon!

babybird2013

I also suffer depression also I can't even hold a job anymore because of these two things you said it right it is help you are a wonderful writer and I will add you to my prayer list I understand full well what you are going through

babybird2013

Know what you are going through I'm having panic attacks and it's causing trouble in my marriage I'm sick of it .

AGreyDawn

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Hey @babybird2013 . I don't know exactly what your situation is or what you're going through. But I empathize with the feelings of frustration and fear that this thing can cause. I don't know you well and that puts me in a shit position to try to give you any advice; obviously you are smart enough to know what you need without me trying to like, tell you what to do. I just wanted to say that depression is in our heads; but just because it's in our heads does not mean that it's not real. If it is harming your future or reducing your quality of life in the present, I would encourage you to get some help if you haven't done so already. Maybe you have. Plenty of people (too many) wait for something to change instead of trying to change it themselves. And with this illness comes a certain amount of helplessness when it comes to breaking routine, which makes it even harder to fight than it already is. (For my part I haven't had a haircut in longer than I'd like to admit, and I keep walking around in these raggedy old runners because I can't seem to gather the strength to go to a shoe store when I just want to be home asleep or numbing myself... all kinds of things like that... maybe you are the same). But at some point we have to decide we need to fight for ourselves. It is very hard to create a plan but if you haven't already done, please try :) It's amazing to look back and feel the difference once you get out of the 'hole'. PM me if you want to talk about this more. I hope you heal soon.
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mysteryabove

I hope you're get better,your writing is truly outstanding.

AGreyDawn

@mysteryabove <333 thank you! It means a lot to me to hear that.
            (And as you can imagine, it's pretty easy to write as Tutankhaten when depressed. It is VERY hard to write Ankh when depressed XD So things got a little slow there...)
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AGreyDawn

Guys! I'm sorry for the radio silence the past few weeks. Unfortunately I have been dealing with some... Scary Adult Problems and I haven't been able to concentrate on the level that I need to in order to write a good book 3 (which is much more plot based than Broken Timepiece 1 and 2). I will get back to posting more of it as soon as I can fix a couple of personal things. Everything should be okay. In the meantime, I have some other stories I can post. Would you like science fiction, shorts, or a weird crime drama?

AdiliaPoessy

@AGreyDawn  hope everything gets better, love the way you write!
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Death_Eater1

I just finished Volume 1 of Broken Time Peice and starting the 2nd one! just letting you know I really enjoy it!!!!! it's great!!

Death_Eater1

Haha not really! I came across it by mistake and read the intro and it sounded very interesting to me, once I started I could not stop. Volume one took me about two days from reading between classes and staying up all nigh 'Which I do not regret' haha. The whole story itself is very good and interesting im so glad I came across this book. Its one of the most well written ones I have seen on here! I love it because I can imagine the characters and I love how you build up King Tuts thoughts and who he is in this story! Its all just so amazing!!!
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AGreyDawn

@Death_Eater1  Really?? Thanks for reading it, I know it's sooo long! Not many people would have the patience. (I had books 1 and 2 printed up and... it took 1 and a half reams of paper. The binder that could hold that mofo has not yet been manufactured, so it just sits like a brick on my bedside table.) Thank you for keeping with it! It must not be easy to trust a writer as new as I am.
            <<<3
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AGreyDawn

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Well folks, the day has finally come. I've finished editing Broken Timepiece, cover to cover, about an hour ago. Took me 10.5 months, because it clocks in at a massive 720 pages long in size 10 font. That makes it thick as my thumb is long, and heavy enough to kill someone with. Let me just say, if you managed to read this giant thing, written by an unknown writer surfing on the corner of the internet, I tip my hat to you. You're a crazy, crazy breed, and I love the hell out of you.

MikeMarsbergen

@AGreyDawn Congrats! That's a massive undertaking.
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AGreyDawn

Hey kids, looks like my day job will be getting the axe by August, so I am FURIOUSLY editing BTP vols 1 and 2 so I can dupe a publisher into buying it ;). I'm not leaving myself much time for writing vol 3 at this time, but as soon as I fix up 1&2 I'll start posting again. (I'll need something to do to keep me from biting my fingernails and fretting!) I'll be around so drop me a message. You know I can't keep my own secrets when it comes to this plot, heh heh ;)

NatalieMarieTorresPa

@AGreyDawn my Eryka says the dang books are entirely too good she can't think about anything else but what's next! my Jasa says we read both volumes in 1 night, mom why didn't you tell us to read it over it's even better the second time! OMG they've downloaded it on both tablets and the computer plus I have it on my phone! they're officially hooked on the life of King tutorial and his wife....I love it!! you're the best!!!

NatalieMarieTorresPa

@AGreyDawn  omg I was in the middle of a conversation with the hubs and my phone vibrated and I saw @AGreyDawn and said I don't have time for you right now....lmao he said okay! I continued reading the message then said what was I saying? Hahaha omg no just write it...I absolutely hate those voice books makes me want to throw things....damn ankh....yes my Eryka was supposed to be like Erykah Badu the singer but the hospital messed up. Erykas getting a choclear implant soon I'm petrified and excited at the same time....she's excited to start reading, expect one of my daughter's to respond to this as well...little girls who have Europe in mind for college are freaking crazy.
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AGreyDawn

@NatalieMarieTorresPa haha ohh that's good. I have been editing them a lot lately (I'm at the part where Ankh has just gone missing in Nubia, Nakhtmin is eating his guts out over it and  Tutankhaten can't say anything). I can't honestly say that I've gutted everything so far, but I have honestly wondered how anyone would enjoy reading it. It's so choppy in spots!
            I've kind of been thinking of doing an audio book. I'd just read the books and load them on youtube so people can listen to them instead of read them over. 
            I just worry that without 2,116 different guys reading the boy parts, people would get confused. 
            Oh one of your childrens is Eryka? That's a cooler spelling than mine, haha. I didn't notice that before.
            ANYWAY, because I felt so bad, I am posting volume 3. I won't be able to post very rapidly because most of my time is going to editing (hopefully I'll be done before we all get laid off O_O) but... oh well. More irons in the fire means more... iron smell in the house. I don't know.
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