LeaTalbot6
I really liked this story and hope there may be a sequel in the future.
The only real critique I have is that mind link conversation be done in a different font as not to be confused with normal conversation.
I look forward to what you come up with next!
AJWhippoorwill
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it and I really appreciate the tip. I'm editing the story now so expect that in the next version. ❤️
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