AJ_Firelight

Hi! Hidden Crown is going though a major editing, so chapter I will be publishing are the earlier ones. They are going to be longer with the exception of chapter four and many more hidden clues and explanations that might not be clear before. There will be changes in names, introduction to new and important characters and a few personality changes in some of the characters- especially Sil. Ciao!
          	Au revoir!
          	*Good bye and have a great day/night in 20 different languages*

luna_star21

Hi! Thank you for adding my poetry book to your reading list! It means a lot :)

AJ_Firelight

@luna_star21  why thank you. I am to please.
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luna_star21

@AJ_Firelight hell of a talent you got there haha
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AJ_Firelight

@luna_star21 well that's my talent. I make puns that are so bad that they make people laugh
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AJ_Firelight

Hi! Hidden Crown is going though a major editing, so chapter I will be publishing are the earlier ones. They are going to be longer with the exception of chapter four and many more hidden clues and explanations that might not be clear before. There will be changes in names, introduction to new and important characters and a few personality changes in some of the characters- especially Sil. Ciao!
          Au revoir!
          *Good bye and have a great day/night in 20 different languages*

AJ_Firelight

Hi! Hidden Crown is going though a major editing, so chapter I will be publishing are the earlier ones. They are going to be longer with the exception of chapter four and many more hidden clues and explanations that might not be clear before. There will be changes in names, introduction to new and important characters and a few personality changes in some of the characters- especially Sil. Ciao!
          Au revoir!
          *Good bye and have a great day/night in 20 different languages*

AJ_Firelight

Hi! Hidden Crown is going though a major editing, so chapter I will be publishing are the earlier ones. They are going to be longer with the exception of chapter four and many more hidden clues and explanations that might not be clear before. There will be changes in names, introduction to new and important characters and a few personality changes in some of the characters- especially Sil. Ciao!
          Au revoir!
          *Good bye and have a great day/night in 20 different languages*

ItsJustPaigee

Hello I was wondering if you would be kind enough as to check out my story incredulous and give me your honest opinion upon what you think.  Normally I would ask some friends or family or followers that I’m close with to do so but I feel like by asking around with a couple of more random people they would be able to provide me with a more honest view. If you are not into the type of story I’m writing I completely understand and it can also change your point of view on it but all I ask is if you tell me what you think about the description of each chapter the details the plot so far, grammar, word choice etc. you needn’t feel inclined to vote since I’m only asking for feedback you can either comment the feedback post on my wall or just p.m. me it. If you do not have time or if you do not want to I completely understand and I think you for your time. 

AJ_Firelight

Hi! I can't provide you much feedback on your book because you are about to begin the story, but I have seen the language and word choice which was remarkable. I especially loved the last line where the use of simple words can form a powerful punchline. Great job! Keep it up
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AJ_Firelight

I would love to read that book. Can you provide some feedback on my book too? It would be greatly appreciated. Thanks
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