AJandHisBrokenworld

I just started a comic if anyone wants to quickly read the intro and gave me some tips/feedback it would be greatly appreciated!

thatonekylie

@AJandHisBrokenworld A COMIC! I'll read it tmr right now I was just checking my notifications btw I'm back :)
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thatonekylie

Sooo... uhhh, heyyy
          
          It's been a WHILE since we talked or since I posted anything on here. Turns out you were right about posting your book all at once or not at all. After all those months of writing insanely slow, I kinda lost my motivation to continue writing and eventually just stopped. I guess stopping was good though otherwise I would just be completely unmotivated and the story would probably just turn out bad. Tbh it's probably because I wasn't reading anymore, and it was right when school started, but I did start reading a new book so hopefully that will sorta cure my writing block? Idk. I was also going through a rlly hard time then so I just wasn't in the mood for doing anything creative. Which is weird because you'd think that would make me want to write about it more right? Idk how my brain works anyway-
          
          I've recently been wanting to get back into wattpad and in touch with some of my online friends so I guess I'm starting here. I promise I'll try as hard as I can to finish reading your book, I feel terrible just vanishing and never finishing it especially right when the drama started getting juicy (yes I reread the parts I read before) As for me, probably don't expect much. I might post like a few random fanfictions or smth but most likely nothing big (at least not yet) Also for now, I don't plan on finishing birds of a feather but I might one day who knows
          
          To end this off on a good note I guess, I have another recommendation :D (no it's not hunger games lol) It's called searching for a world that doesn't exist and I genuinely think you'd like it, it's a 2-part minecraft arg/documentary about a guy who finds a weird book he did not write in his mc world and he has to find the secret behind the world and the person who wrote the book. This may sound a little weird but as I was reading back through your book and comments, I realized you kinda reminded me of one of the characters. It's actually so good like I can not stop thinking about it 

thatonekylie

@AJandHisBrokenworld lol, and the fact that Cinderella and the prince have 4 love songs doesn't helo
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AJandHisBrokenworld

@thatonekylie Lol, we did little mermaid and I have never been more glad to be an actually character as ensemble was in 4-5 songs I belive.
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thatonekylie

Cinderella the musical, it's ok just not if you're in ensemble there's like 3 songs...
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AJandHisBrokenworld

I just started a comic if anyone wants to quickly read the intro and gave me some tips/feedback it would be greatly appreciated!

thatonekylie

@AJandHisBrokenworld A COMIC! I'll read it tmr right now I was just checking my notifications btw I'm back :)
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AJandHisBrokenworld

Note to self, everything on Wattpad is an illusion. Ive done some math and used some outside sources and found that people with stories that have "thousands" of readers only have around way under 50, and that being generous with the calculations. kind of funny to think about but makes sense when I see that one person reading my story brought it from 0 to 678. The internet continues to baffle in all its illusions.

Najamsister

We probably are entering the so called "future" where everything fascinates us with new technology
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JubileeCambish

Hey, Do you happen to be doing NaNoWriMo this year? I'm working to put to gather an accountability group of teen writers have an online meeting once a week and progress emails the rest of the time. It starts tomorrow!! Ack! So, yeah, Saturdays somewhere between 12pm - 3pm--- If you can make it it would be awesome! :D

JubileeCambish

Just letting you know that I sent out the email for day four check ins!!! :D
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AJandHisBrokenworld

@JubileeCambish no offense but I don’t really do calls, but you can still send me prints and stuff
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JubileeCambish

@AJandHisBrokenworld 
            I'm kinda  doing it independently--- And gosh---Why I don't know cause I'm already busy- 
            but essentiality I'm trying to make an email list of teen writers and then I can send out a prompt every day of November, to which members will respond to with where they are at with their writing goal, and then on Saturdays I'll send out a google meet invite or something and we can have a verbal discussion. (the more I think about it the more it seems sketch, lol) 
            It's my first time trying to organize anything, and I probably should have started before the day before NaNoWriMo! Ack! I'm trying to coordinate while my family gets ready for halloween-- So if your up for it, I can add ur email to the list, (so far there is me and one other(still trying to spread the word(again, why did I wait until last minute??)  Then tomorrow I'll send out an email that goes over word counts and progress and plans and stuff. Idk! I'm trying to build community, XD
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JubileeCambish

Happy Halloween!!

JubileeCambish

@AJandHisBrokenworld 
            Yeah, Your probably right
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AJandHisBrokenworld

@JubileeCambish that’s fun, just saw your post, and you did a great job, I’m just surprised you put your face on it. There’s a ton of weirdos online and if I was you I would take down that post
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JubileeCambish

@JubileeCambish 
            Well, I can't figure out how to add an image in wattpad (I'm terrible at tech for being born in such an age as this, haha) so I just put it in community post
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AJandHisBrokenworld

Ive added a rough sketch of the Orange sunset to the Poem

IhaveADHDandimgay

@AJandHisBrokenworld dw I wont judge lol. some of them are actually really good! And in case you haven't noticed I'm also one of the most cringe people on earth XD
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AJandHisBrokenworld

@IhaveADHDandimgay Yeah, I used to be obsessed with them and decide to post some of my old ones here lol, please don't judge me based on some of the pure cringe that is that poem collection XD (I actually only just opened WP to update the Poems)
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AJandHisBrokenworld

I started a book for my poems.. crud

AJandHisBrokenworld

Maybe, still a but bummed as they where going to play heart for brains, cant handle change ect. luckly it wasnt a total lost as there was a super young band there called dwllrs who ive been not stop listing today as they are actually pretty good.
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JubileeCambish

@AJandHisBrokenworld 
            Ahh man! That is a bummer-but who knows- maybe twenty years in the future the baby will have developed a love for music and brought a whole new assortment of songs and creativity to the table for more people to listen to
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AJandHisBrokenworld

@JubileeCambish Well, this is a little depressing but rember that band Roar I showed you? so basicly they had a concert planned at a music festival scheduled for yesterday and I flew all the way out to it and I took one of my friends with me who also has a love for the band and we where so hyped.. then we got there and Roar was no where to be found so my mom used her big account to message the band and they responded pretty quickly to tell her that the lead singer's wife was having a baby! I'm happy for them but a little bummed XD. my friend looked so sad and I feel so bad for her.
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AJandHisBrokenworld

How I miss the orange sunset,
          	And our careless bets.
          	An innocent time free,
          	Free of all non glee.
          
          	But as seasons go,
          	Our relationship we throw.
          	Split between places,
          	Destian to not see each other’s faces.
          
          	But then we did,
          	But of companionship we were rid.
          	
          	Now, I still see the orange sunset
          	Even when dark, hopeless, and wet.
          	When the light is present,
          	Courage makes like a pheasant
          
          	So now I just sit in my corner,
          	And imagine how I would have adore her.
          	That beautiful orange sunset, and the walks,
          	That's when we made our talk.
           
          ...

AJandHisBrokenworld

@Najamsister Thanks, one of my best friends drew it up for me, unfortunately they moved pretty far away but next weekend I'm supposed to fly out and visit her.
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Najamsister

@AJandHisBrokenworld And, ya, (off topic but-). I really like your Pfp, I think it's really cute, and also I saw your comments here and there on few stories, whenever I saw them, I'd laugh (like an idiot) for no reason (reason: it's because I like your Pfp)
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