AKKTrigramLabrys

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Read and comment on 'Life-Speed' my latest public project!
          I've begun a second project out of the various projects I have in mind. This story focuses on a girl by the name of Jayly. Unlike with Jak, there is less focus on the violent side of life. In fact, the focus of the story has been shifted from outward to inward as our character discovers the beauty of introspection. Once again I call on you to read and criticise my work so that I can see what works and what doesn't. Hopefully you'll enjoy this story, it is a work in progress so things might be changed every now and then so please bare with me. Share this story with friends and see what they think, I need all the opinions I can get.
          
          Thanks~
          
          ~AKKTrigramLabrys~

The World In The Eyes Of Jak is now done. I refrain from using the word 'complete' because it is not, as you'll discover in the last chapter. I urge you to read it and tell me what you think, I need constructive criticism for my new project book. I hope you have enjoyed/are enjoying what I have written so far. 
          
          Have a great holiday. 
          
          ~AKKTrigramLabrys~

If the story 'The World In The Eyes Of Jak' hasn't received the new update on your phone that contains a Chapter 1 structure reconfiguration that I'm sure you will appreciate and will allow for better and easier reading then please log out of Wattpad and log back in. Wattpad often glitches like this and doing this will clear up such problems. Thanks and I hope you're all enjoying some great literature.  :D