Read and comment on 'Life-Speed' my latest public project!
I've begun a second project out of the various projects I have in mind. This story focuses on a girl by the name of Jayly. Unlike with Jak, there is less focus on the violent side of life. In fact, the focus of the story has been shifted from outward to inward as our character discovers the beauty of introspection. Once again I call on you to read and criticise my work so that I can see what works and what doesn't. Hopefully you'll enjoy this story, it is a work in progress so things might be changed every now and then so please bare with me. Share this story with friends and see what they think, I need all the opinions I can get.
Thanks~
~AKKTrigramLabrys~