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New chapter in Total Nonsense!!!
          Check it out.

Hi y'all 
          I've posted a new story, it's called Total Nonsense.
          Check it out!!
          And, i will be posting a new chapter for The Archiolens today :)

Hi dearies can y'all read Archiolens ;)) I'm out of motivation:(((

Hey beautiful, could u pls give my book a try also vote and comment if possible, thanku and sorry!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/378331643-dil-dosti-aur-drama-chaos-of-hearts

Hey! I just started a brand new Wattpad project called The Story We Wrote, and I think you’d be perfect for it!
          
          It’s a collaborative story where each chapter is written by a different writer. I’ve posted 5 unique story beginnings, and readers vote on which one becomes the official start. Then, writers submit their version of the next chapter—and I publish my favorite one (with full credit and a shoutout to your profile + books).
          
          This is a great chance to:
          
          Get your writing seen by more readers
          
          Gain exposure for your other stories
          
          Be part of something super creative and totally different
          
          Challenge yourself and have fun with storytelling
          
          The story can go anywhere—romance to sci-fi, mystery to fantasy, even genres blending together. It’s unpredictable, exciting, and you never know what twist the next writer will bring.
          
          If you want to get involved, now’s the best time—early chapters will set the tone and get a lot of attention. You can check it out on my profile (@bob-steve)!
          
          Let me know if you have any questions 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391701757-the-story-we-wrote

Hey, so I read your work and I like it. You did a very good job in writing the story. I get that it is a futuristic battle story, so details are important and you have that. I don't get lose the concept of the story or lost in the details. I would as you to put more interactions with the characters with each other. Probably make them describe the details of the conflict or the scenery, thats a writers tip. Also do you plan to make it into a series, if so drama between characters is always the best to grab people's attention. In your description try to mention the main character that the reader will follow this  way we know who to care about as we read. Hope this helps, but I think your doing a good job on it.