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Sooooooo, there was a teeny tiny hiccup. A little itty bitty snag with A Little Left to Give.
I changed the ending again.
*hastily hides behind a wall*
I know! I know! This is like the third time Ive revised the story but I realised that with how the characters are and how they are turning out, the OG ending wasn't realistic and I realised that I was putting my own wishes into the story rather than what was realistic.
So the ending got changed. The new ending feels much better and I know its healthier for everyone involved.
Now for updates. I need just a tiny bit of help. I have a chapter ready to go except for one tiny detail. I cannot, for the life of me, remember if Julieta has a scent. Im in the middle of rereading the story and I haven't stumbled on it. If anyone can help a lady out with this, I would be sooo grateful!
Currently the one part litterally reads 'followed (insert Julieta's scent here)' and I dont want to give her a scent if Ive already given her one. So if anyone spotted it in the book, let me know what it was. If it's not in there, feel free to let me know so I can put myself out of my own misery. Its been like a fucking WEEK of this.
I told myself, you gotta keep on top of your character sheets and then I was like naaaah I wont forget.
Really, Anna? FUCKING REALLLY????
So any help would be appreciated!