AMLong18

Hey y'all! If you haven't already I was wondering if you could do me a HUGE favor? I'm working on The Chase and I need helpful feedback. Could you read it and comment something that would improve it? It is not done but I would like to know my weaknesses now so that I can do better from here on. Thanks everyone and have a great day!!!

AMLong18

Hey y'all! If you haven't already I was wondering if you could do me a HUGE favor? I'm working on The Chase and I need helpful feedback. Could you read it and comment something that would improve it? It is not done but I would like to know my weaknesses now so that I can do better from here on. Thanks everyone and have a great day!!!