@addisonhalberg Thanks for the feedback, I hope you don't mind if I address some of the things you brought up. First of all, in this version of the story, Feyre and Rhys do not have a suicide pact (as this version starts before that happened, consequently meaning it doesn't at all this time around). Secondly, I realised your point about letting Azriel's death go to waste before I published this version, hence why it was not the original and the one that I ended up using for the story. Lastly, I was in no way trying to romanticise suicide, though I can see how people would interpret it that way, I just wanted to create something that gave a reader the mixture of emotions that the character was feeling: a sadness but also the relief that she felt. Quite honestly, all of these reasons you have pointed out are exactly why this version was not chosen to be the official ending.
Nonetheless, thank you for your feedback, if you have any other feedback or would like to continue this conversation in any way feel free to message me and I will get back to you. I hope you will consider reading my other stories and you will enjoy them :)