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And again the mixed proves dii it confuses us alottt we don't get who is speaking to whom and when sometimes. It's a good concept but the mixed proves makes one a bit more confused about what is truly going on. And then there's Samrat's identity slips, the plot and timeline are amazing we don't deny it but what we want you to look out for is the slips that causes the decrease of interest and I am saying this all here as a writer and a reader both, we writers know that we do mistakes and we can learn up from them, but what we don't get to know is where exactly we lack of, and yk I love it when someone points out the mistakes for me it makes me feel that 'yeah this is where I lack at, oh now I can be better' and this all I want to say to you otherwise your book is amazingg couldn't help reading it...
          
          And in the end dii You're amazing never lose your spark of writting for some less amount of comments okayy? You will reach success when it is planned to walk towards you, and in my eyes you have already earned it.
          
          Wishhing you a very successfull life ahead that is filled with loads of warmth and love in it.
          
          Have a great day ahead.
          Take care
          
          Your Chaoticc Readerr
          
          — PART 2 —

Heyy there, Our Precious Writer ❤️
          
          I just completed the book and here I'm with my little bit review of the book. But before everything all giving you a bigg hugg and lots of lovee for congrats on completing the book. The book, I have so many words to say about it yet I still feel lost to say. It is everything I can tell you but also not. It is filled with the warmth most of crave for and love we yearn for, a family we wish for. Brothers who would protect us at any cost. It is the emotion, and I loved it so mucchh that I got super invested into it, I spend half of the day reading it and completed it in justt 2 days. I loved the plots, the characters the morally grey ones, the thoeries every sinlge one of them I absolutely lovedd them.
          
          Reading this book gave me a sort of peace in this daily life of hustle that I wouldn't forget and A bigg thanks for writing this book and being through and through it all, and pulling yourself out of those hard times when writing with nothing felt like a blanket around. You have reached a level now where all your hardwork is paying off. And being an author myself I know how this all feels but try to hold on okayy, You are amazingg. And strongest out there too.
          
          This book is the PeRfEcT eXaMpLe Of BeAuTy WiTh FlAwS.... like superbbb but there are somethings I would like for you to look out in your next book is specify the age gaps keep a prepared chart of it if possible it would help you, because there are many scene's in which I noticed so many of the mistakes which made confusion flare so much in our brains yes confusing the reader is the thing but not with ages you can confuse with names and person but not age, specially of reyansh his age clarification needs to be there in the book, what we get hard to know is that reyansh is the twin of aanya or her elder brother but if he is her elder brother by 4 years how can he possibly there in school 2 years sounds okay and understandable but 4 whole years!?
          
          — PART 1 —

Hii !! Please don't judge me but it's my second time reading this book and I still love it, it's so so good 

Hello author ji 
          I hope u are doing well and good 
          Today only I start reading ur story and completed reading it too 
          I loved the story and every character 
          I just want to know is there any other story Ananya bcoz she doesn't have partner every one hass 
          But thank you for this exceptional storyyy 
          Love you  
          Your reader......

Dear Author,
          
          I just completed reading your book, and I genuinely don’t have enough words to describe how magnificent it was. Every chapter felt alive with emotions, warmth, and depth. The way you portrayed the bond between the siblings was absolutely beautiful. Their love, loyalty, and unity touched my heart so deeply that it felt like I was living alongside them throughout the story. Their connection was truly on another level.
          
          Each character slowly became my favourite, but Reyansh holds a special place in my heart. His personality, emotions, and presence in the story were unforgettable. He felt so real that I found myself smiling, worrying, and feeling emotional because of him.
          
          Thank you for creating a story that made me feel so attached to the characters and their journey. Books like yours stay with readers long after the last page is turned, and this one definitely will stay with me for a very long time. ✨
          
          Wishing you endless success and many more beautiful stories ahead.❤️❤️❤️

मुझे कहानी बहुत पसंद आई, लेकिन मुझे अक्सर कहानी के कुछ हिस्सों को हिंदी से अंग्रेजी में अनुवाद करने के लिए ट्रांसलेशन ऐप का इस्तेमाल करना पड़ता है। मेरा सुझाव है कि कहानी में हिंदी पाठ के ठीक बाद अंग्रेजी अनुवाद भी जोड़ दिया जाए। (मैंने गूगल ट्रांसलेट का इस्तेमाल किया है, अगर कुछ शब्द सही से अनुवादित नहीं हुए हों तो क्षमा करें)

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