Puuny20
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Hi how are you i hope your feeling ok i just finished reread your book and i was thinking if like to read a different dr stone if you do i recommend Dr.Stone(D) I.S by limbosity its really good and I think you can improve your work by reading more ( i hope you don't mind my advice) (・∀・)
Puuny20
@ASomberSong thank god i thought I was harsh on you if you want some constructive advice I liked the start its so interesting and unique i like the chemistry between ukyo and mc and the ludicrous ideas about tssuka in mc maind and for the work it's still in the beginning and have a lot of time to the idea to be clear i hope that helps (๑´•.̫ • `๑)
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ASomberSong
@Puuny20 Nah, you’re fine. I was just hoping you could give me some constructive criticism. I know my story isn’t perfect, so I always want to improve. I’m so glad that you think our mcs are both unique though! I’ll make sure to do my best and improving as time goes on
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Puuny20
@ASomberSong oh god no i like it so much its give a mystery vibes i like how the mc is giving the smart sleepy mc and am sorry i loved your book ( ;∀;) and just wanted to give you one of my favourite books because both of you make the mc so unique and lovely am sorry again i don't want you to change the work Ó╭╮Ò
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