AStoryToBeTold

@April_Parr You're welcome! I'm glad you're going to continue writing, you're incredibly talented. I shall definitely keep reading when I can, and I will be sure to give you more feedback! Your story is incredibly unique. Any more questions you have, don't been afraid to ask.

Goddess_Seraphi

Thank you so much for your comment on my story, it made me feel much better about the story in general. The great feedback has inspired me to work a bit more on the second book my spare time, even when I feel too tired to do it. I hope you keep reading, and I'd love any feedback you'd like to give. 

crazybarny

Thank your for your wonderful comment on my story. It has given me a big confidence boost. When I start a story I'm always worried about the readers, will they like it or not. People in my school have read one of my storys and said: it was rubbish and I can't write. Behind my back, so it brought my confidence down a lot. I'm currently writting the next chapter. I hope you contine to read and give more comments. Once again. Thank you so much :) xxxxxxx