DesiIndianGirl2

Ek baar ye story check out kar sakti hain aap?
          
          If you like it, do share reviews : )
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/406285266?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=DesiIndianGirl2

DesiIndianGirl2

Okay, I'll make sure of that in future. Thankyou!❤️
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AUTHOR_COVET

@DesiIndianGirl2 i was saying when u write
            You give a description abt future like i read the second chapter
            There the parents decided to let the male lead survive until he graduated.
            And you already wrote that he wouldn't be silent after that.
            This would be their mistake
            This gives the readers a lack of suspense as they know somehow a part of story that might come up.
            Instead don't mention the future in present.
            Let present stay haunting, hopeless , tough.
            Show him fighting but when its time
            Dont give predictions
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DesiIndianGirl2

@AUTHOR_COVET I will because they help me improve (I don't write that good anyways, I'm still improving)
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