@AVITwd Thanks for the feedback. I do plan to make the characters more mature as the story goes on and by the way they adapt to the life around them and how it can change them over a period of time.
@FinoBtw it's a no problem, mate. I liked the way you wrote it down. Tho, work on the characters. They seem to be a bit mature. But yeah, again, I guess that's a thing in twd. Either way, great writing. Keep it up