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I'm so proud of myself because I've now got my sister to say something Drop Dead Fred says. One of my favourite lines!
          Drop Dead Fred: ooo what a lovely piece of broccoli, IT'S BEYOND DISGUSTING!

Ok here's a snippet of my story.
          This is Adam's point of view, he's supposed to be rather creepy just saying. NOT HIS COMPLETE POV!!!
          
          Adam's pov:
          I growled as my love attempted to escape out of my grasp and I tightened my grip on her gentle and pale skin. "Stop resisting me dear~" I whispered into her oh so sweet neck and felt her stiffen. I furrowed my brows as I held her close to me, "why are you so afraid of me, my love?" I asked gently trailing short sweet kisses to her ear, "I won't harm you, you're too precious to punish harshly."

Ok so I'm thinking of writing a thriller style thing called 'Escape' and I'm currently writing it on my notes on my phone to see how it goes before putting it on here but um I might put a section of it up so you can read it and tell what you think so I know if I should bother or not.