A_Force_User

Damn... 100 Followers. Never thought I'd see the day.

Helikal

Your works are truly entertaining. Do you think you could go back to doing your stories in second person? As in referring to the reader as 'You.' It feels more.. immersive, in a way. :D ( or it could be that the recent chapters only consisted of dialogue)
          
          Maybe go back to explaining what we do. Example: "You walked back with ( insert character.)" Instead of just dialogue; other than that you're doing great!! :)

Helikal

I'm late but, you're welcome! And again, you're doing well on this in my opinion! :)
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A_Force_User

@ DavidBukowski0  thanks for the comment. I'll try to keep it in mind for the next chapters.
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