New at writing please constructive criticism. Thanks xx
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A_mystery00
Feb 16, 2016 12:19AM
Hey guys I have just started my first story "Only he knows" please leave good and /or critical comments on it please. Thanks for reading xxxView all Conversations
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Only He Knows
He looks at me with his gorgeous brown eyes and I can't help but feel close to him why is he so captivating...