A_nocturnal_author

I'm working on a few stories and would love constructive criticism! If you would be interested in reading any of my stories, feel free to comment on them or to message me :)

Karen290001

Hey there
          
          I wrote a really cool book called THE VAMPIRE”S CHOSEN MATE. I would really appreciate it if you could maybe give the book a read. Any feedback in comments or votes would be much appreciated. If you are too busy then that is fine as well. I totally understand. 
          
          I attached the link for the book below if you want to check it out. Have a great day further
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/237220686-the-vampire%27s-chosen-mate
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/237220686-the-vampire%27s-chosen-mate

AlexisRBooks

Hey, thanks so much for the votes on May in the Wastelands! I’d definitely love your feedback! ❤️

AlexisRBooks

@amber_jordan That's so wonderful... thank you so much for that! <3 It really motivates me to keep writing when I learn that my readers enjoy the story.
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A_nocturnal_author

I think it’s a great story, I love May as a character and can’t wait to see how she grows. She’s got such a positive nature despite her near-constant pain, limitations and the hardships she’s faced both in socioeconomic status and with her family, contrasted nicely with the other characters featured so far
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misslullaby_

Honestly thanks so much for voting and reading my story. I really hope you liked it!

A_nocturnal_author

@misslullaby_  when jerias 'dies' before the attack
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misslullaby_

Lmaoo what part was that at?
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A_nocturnal_author

I started it a while ago but I was so distraught at the end of what had been posted I stopped reading but I saw it again and was like imma finish it. Absolutely loved it
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