hi, would you mind checking out my story. Maybe critic it a bit and suggest ways to improve it? Sorry I sound so demanding. hahaha. but i'd really appreciate it if you do.
is about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl.
Also, you could suggest some of your stories to me in exchange.
thanks!!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/UbMscjHNLH