Jayferrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Heyy buddy i liked your story but can we make some changes that jay will not die but keifer’s father make him believe that she i dead and when jay will wake up a nurse say her that keifer left jay so jay will start living her life somewhere else and also she caries keifer’s baby(optional) and yeah keifer will get marry with the girl whom his family choses for him but keifer can’t able to give that girl love the way he loved jay and he always feels that somewhere she is alive we can name the girl as evelyn in short eve so after some years there would be rumours that keifer and eve are soon to be parents only rumours not true and then jay will come to him bcz jay always thought her child who is their father when the child saw keifer with eve he will start questioning jay so she have to take her child there with her what do you sayy??? Please bro don’t think that I didn’t like your story I really loved it but the thing is that our jayfer is made for happy endings you know i hope you will understand
Aairraii
@Jayferrrrrrrrrrrrrr actually yk just cut the part where he will get married . idont want to see him marrying someone else, and the baby part plz the other part are so good you can use them ☺️