Aakash Rathi

New poem after ages, Doubts. https://www.wattpad.com/story/94383747

Ok whenever u read this i want u to know tat im glad i found another indian tat too male on this site 'welcome' i read ur 1st story and it kinda brought a smile to my face.....im not a writer but i hv read a lot of stories here so plz dont take this in a bad way but ur writing needs more spice in it and also u need to be more better at ur dialogs....really dont mind me i just want some of our country's writers to be seen on the 1st page of what's hot list!!good luck n update soon!!    

thnxx dude tht really helped. .
          

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