Sarah

@mareekayy hey i know that you messaged me 11 months ago, but i seriously just got on and just got the message :/ so uhm, yah i'll read your stuff and if could read mine that'd be epic...no one really reads it and i honestly want feed back
          Thx!!!
          ~Jordan

Could you please read my first book called Conjured? It's a supernatural fantasy about a thirteen year old boy named Chuck. He is going to find out that he's a very rare and gifted person with the ability to conjure up just about anything the heart can dream or imagine. He will have to risk everything to save our world and his hidden, magical world called Astrum. Also resting on his shoulders is the dire need to rekindle the magic that was completely destroyed everywhere nearly thirteen years ago. Join Chuck in an adventure of a lifetime along with his best friend Alex and his newfound magical companion, a Gremble named Chaos. Ultimate magic awaits you inside the spectacular world of Conjured! 
          Please read Conjured today. The first three chapters are now available on Wattpad! Please vote and comment.
          Thanks. 

Hi! My name is ­­­Liauna n I was wondering i­f ­yo­u can read one of my stories? 
          I would really ­­­appriciate it!! oh n i don­t ­mi­nd criticism!! 
          comment/vote
          oh n tell me if­­ u dislike it or wat made u dislike it 
          if u do like it...bcom a fan!!
          Thanks! 
          ~VmpLily~

Hey i know these can be annoying sometimes but it would be really nice if you could read my first story and tell me what you think but if not no hard feeling Thank You Very Much

Hi! My name is ­Liauna n I was wondering if yo­u can read one of my stories? 
          I would really ­appriciate it!! oh n i dont mi­nd criticism!! 
          
          comment/vote/fa­n... if u want!! :] 
          
          oh n tell me if u dislike it or wat made u dislike it
          
          Thanks! 
          
          ~VmpLily~

hi! I'm Yna and i'm currently writing "Dangerous Prince: The Choice"... i hope you have free time to read it... please leave a comment there (I just want to know what you think about it... and if you liked it) or vote or become a fan...
          here are some of the lines from my story...
          
          "But I have said before that i don't like you!" Urgh! The last thing I needed now was a stalker!
          
          "I don't care," she said stubbornly. "I won't give up. I know you'll fall for me in the end."
          
          "What the -" She smiled when she saw the reaction on my face. "I. Will. Never. Fall. For. You."
          
          Analee's smile grew wider. "I can always make you love me."
          
          "What?" I shouted.
          
          She bit her lower lip again, her eyes gleaming with anticipation.
          
          "You are a pathetic little bitch," I said through gritted teeth. Was this demon making fun of me? Was this some kind of a joke for her?
          
          She walked gracefully towards me and before i could even move a muscle, she tip - toed and kissed me on the lips.
          
          Damn! She stole my first kiss! The nerve of this girl!
          
          She moved her face an inch away from me and whispered huskily, "Well, I am the bitch who will make sure that one day you'll kneel before me begging for my affection."
          
          thanks! ^_^

Hey,
          
          Anyways.... I am going to ask the one question that most people hate getting... here it goes. Would you mind taking a look at my story 'The Art of Hope'? It would mean a lot and I would love some feedback. 
          
          Thanks for your time,
          newhope 

@isa_soes: of course!!! haha

Could u read/comment/vote/criticize my story please??
          
          Title: Special Ones
          
          <3 Isa

@solyrical: i would love to! and i have to say the same...i don't have any confidence behind my work, so any positive (or negative) feedback is appreciated!